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This is one design that I made for contest in our country :)
Nothing special..
The company is fictitious :D
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I do not mean any of these things in a bad way. But I'll say what I feel, like the impression I get right now.

Bad stuff:
"Lorem ipsum" font should not be serif, it should be sans serif... ( if you don't know what it means.... Serif fonts are the fonts with extra edges and stuff like TimesNew Roman, but sans serifis the fonts like "Jennifer design" and Arial).....
The buttons "Home, Gallery, Forum, Contact" are too big for the page, and look abnormal compared to the rest of the page.
The buttons could be smaller and without an iris/gradient.
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But don't get this the wrong way, I'm not trying to be mean or say bad stuff about it, because I loved it! To prove it I can say that there's a reason I actually bother to comment on this rather than all the other webdesign on DA.
Hope this was in anyway helpful. And I meant this in a good way

And I know you probably have thought about this or that you're aware of the the things I said.